Monday, August 31, 2009

Five Minute Poem, A Challenge from Totalfekineejit

Blogs Rule My Life
Around the world I go to see
How bloggers fare, from Bea to thee
In Oz and LA they blog away
We all have so bloomin' much to say.
I try to see them all each day
I have so many - I cry 'NO WAY'
I click on those who leave a comment
Oh no - another blog friend I lament!
Some post art and some write rhyme
Some are so bad - it is a crime
Like this little ode, done in less than five minutes
If there were a prize, 'To be sure' I'd not to win it!


Look, I know it's really bad but we're not allowed to correct it or change it. I did it in about 3 minutes! You can tell? lol

15 comments:

Totalfeckineejit said...

Deadly BT,well done and in only three minutes? I was too generous with the time! Great last line and I like the rhyming of comment and lament.Another challenge for next week so watch out! And thanks a million for joining in.

Titus said...

Well done BT. It was actually a lot harder than I thought.

Bea said...

You my friend have blogged yourself out.
It's time to stop and do not pout.
You've work to do in your garden, I say.
And, pictures to take, now don't act all fey.
Grab your trowel and your camera and go, go play.
:)DoneinundertwominuteBea

blushing rose said...

BT ~ I can't top you & Bea. Cute! & fun! Have a lovely week. TTFN ~ Marydon

BT said...

Thanks Total, Titus, Bea and Blushing. I've emailed my replies.

Cris, Artist in Oregon said...

I think you should win something. It's cute. :))

NanU said...

...chuckles...

Stampmaiden said...

Bravo, Bravo! and Clap clap clap!!!Linda

Leatherdykeuk said...

Cleverly done!

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Sometimes the best things go unedited.

The Weaver of Grass said...

Love it!

BT said...

Thanks Cris and NanU. Linda, you are too kind. Thank you Rachel, Lisa and Weaver. It was a fun thing to do.

soulbrush said...

yes autumn is in the air. i love your spider web most, you are very artistic with your camera, a great eye for beauty.

Valerie said...

Cute. Now then, be proud 'cause I couldn't write two lines in three minutes.

Dominic Rivron said...

I wish I could come up with rhymes
In similarly impressive times!
I start off like this
And then things go amiss
And I'm never quite sure what to do after the fourth line...